Sunday, February 22, 2015

Green Living Question 1

Question 1
Green Living

Green Living Question 1


As the world as evolving, pollution has been an increasing problem. This is why green living has become a source to conserve our land and natural resources. It is a practice that promotes wise use of natural resources. Many parts of the world is now discussing whether conservation should be required from all citizens.  However, should the government be allowed to force the practice of green living? The government should be responsible for fostering the green practices.
For the past few years, America’s bad habits have weakened our society’s ability and willingness to conquer big challenges that face us. It has been led to believe that America has lost its way due to many disasters such as the 9/11 incident.  The world is getting “..hot, flat, and crowded (source c).” It both means literally and figuratively. As the middle classes rise and population grows, our planet is becoming more and more unstable. Thomas Friedman states that in order for our planet to get cleaner, we have to create “...tools, systems, energy sources, and ethics.” The government is the one who should be responsible in providing for the people what is needed to a green lifestyle. The government fostering the citizens with tools for green practices will allow America to prosper.
The congress has been considering anti-global-warming legislation; however, environmentalists disagree. The Environmental Defense Fund claims, “For about a dime a day, we can solve climate change (source D).” EPF says that an average household can have the costs as low as 98 dollars per year because high energy prices are partly established by government rebates. These are the unrealistic conclusions because the economy is always non-stop moving, so the economy constantly accommodates major changes. One study from Massachusetts Institute of Technology shows “....transportation needs in 200f with locally produced biofuels would require 500 million acres of U.S. land- (source D).” The selling of the green economy might lead to uncertain reliability, which can maximize the dangers of global warming.
Countries around the world are making an effort to conserve natural resources. Source E represent a chart of about 54% of the world’s total carbon dioxide emissions. It states, “American and Japanese residents express the highest levels of environmental stewardship (source E).” This was ale to happen because of the strong government involvement. Since the government took on the task in helping green practices, the United States and Japan was able to conserve the most compared to the other countries.
If government takes on the full responsibility of fostering green living, America would become powerful and influential to other parts of the world. The sooner the government and citizens take charge in living the green life, the world will become wealthier and healthier.

2 comments:

  1. Great opening sentence to introduce your thesis. Great use of language throughout the essay and good supporting content used throughout the body paragraphs to support your theses. Catchy phrases and sentences throughout the text that help keep the readers interest. Great essay overall start to finish.

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  2. When persuading an audience of a topic or issue by essay, it is understandably a task to be able to grasp attention and agreement with these readers because it is not a priority of theirs to read; its not something they WANT to take in within their busy schedule of the day. Yoonjung uses standard humor and a structure that will have you reading a little more than you wanted to in the beginning. The essay uses examples and personal opinion to have readers on her side believe what she says and support the cause themselves.

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